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When people learn a foreign language, all four skills(listening, speaking, reading and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The question of whether people learn a foreign
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skills
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 of the same importance or not has triggered an intense controversy in the realm of learning English. Some believe the
four
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skills
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 are equally important, while others claim some of the
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 are more vital than others. Personally,I support the former more than the latter. Admittedly,those who hold
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 opinion have their reasons. On one hand,
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language
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 is used to communicate,so listening and speaking are much more useful. Daily life starts from smoothly expressing ourselves by oral
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reading and writing are mostly used in
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school.
On the other hand
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, some people think that learning reading and writing is more necessary.
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 is mainly because the use of listening and speaking are lower than reading and writing if a learner doesn’t go abroad in his future plan.
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,my idea is completely opposite to theirs mentioned above.
To begin
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 exams test
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skills
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 rather than only one of them.
For example
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,
IESTS
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,TOEFL,PTE and DET all are admitted internationally and they have
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 tested subjects.
In addition
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,
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skills
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 are strongly linked to each other.
That is
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 to say,the complex grammar in reading can be used in writing;the short or long sentence in writing can be used in speaking;the standard pronunciation in speaking can be used in listening; the variety of vocabulary in listening can be used in reading. Given the above argument,it is reasonable to conclude that every skill is important in learning
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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