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Jakarta, 19 January 2022 To: Respected Programme Director of National University of Ireland Galway Dear Sir or Madam, As my current work is focusing on improvement in the company that has already been running for years, for my future Master’s Degree program, I intend to focus studying on how to help Start-up companies or Small and Medium Enterprises, that have just run their businesses either with their owned capital or with investment from foreign countries, allocate their capital effectively and efficiently. I am strongly inspired by people around me who have just built their businesses but have to close their ventures due to financial problems, especially in

this

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, I am highly passionate to study finance more deeply because it has core importance in today’s most dynamic and emergent world. At the same time, I would like to take part in realizing one of the sustainable development goals of the United Nations about decent work and economic growth that aim to encourage the formalization and growth of Small and Medium Enterprises, including through access to financial services. I would like to start from my motherland, Indonesia, as one of the emerging market economies that

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been received lots of investment. I choose the National University of Ireland Galway (NUI Galway) because it is accredited by the Association to Advance Collegiate Schools of Business (AACSB), the Association of Chartered Certified Accountants (ACCA) Exemption Accreditation, and affiliated with the Institute of Chartered Financial Analysts (CFA).

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, the core modules offered include ‘Advanced Corporate Finance’ that will strengthen my skills in applying a range of corporate finance tools and techniques to assist in making

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, financial and strategic decisions under conditions of uncertainty,

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pandemic situation. Upon gaining a Master’s Degree, I plan to work in the Ministry of Investment, to implement what I have learnt for economic growth in Indonesia.

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