Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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mankind behaviour around the globe. Some believe that mankind's well-being is the responsibility of the ministry while others say that folks should be taken responsible for their own

strength

.

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essay discusses both views, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, the government has

the

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numerous responsible for their

citizens

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citizen's

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strength

because they have a multitude

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resource

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like financial, medical team, research centre,

scientist

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and energy

department

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.

Therefore

, they are the main protector of their residents' well-being like coronavirus.

For example

, a deadly illness namely Coronavirus has

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spread

spreaded

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around the world while the government took a plethora

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action

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to solve

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terrible situation namely conducting awareness and finding vaccination,

therefore

, the ministry is the crucial

responsible

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for humans energy.

On the other hand

,

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person should be taken

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responsible for their own well-being because each every person health is different and they only know about their fitness condition,

hence

, they should maintain their

strength

perfectly.

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, in

this

pandemic situation folks is the only reason for reducing the virus ratio around the world because they could maintain the social distance between crowd place,

as a result

,

this

kind of virus

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tremendously by folks involvement.

Therefore

, mankind should be responsible for their own fitness. To conclude,

strength

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important for the population and the government is

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responsible for their

residents

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well-being because they have

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plenty of resources; a man should be taken numerous responsible for their own

strength

because they know about their condition well.

However

, in my opinion, about

this

, the ruling party has the most responsible for their

citizens

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citizen's

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fitness because

this

is

a

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main aspect of ruling parties'

agenta

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agenda

. I hope

this

process is conducive to building a healthy society.