Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people deem, due to
advertisement
sale of various products
has been enhanced, whereas others believed that with the introduction of this
technology individuals get distracted from the real products
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This
essay totally agrees with the latter phenomenon and supporting points will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
Advertisement
is the platform where people can gather keen knowledge of various products
and services in terms of its
quality and quantity with other numerous features. Along with it, Correct pronoun usage
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commercials are shown on television with a great storyline through which Correct article usage
a few
public
get attracted towards it easily. Resultantly, they purchase that Correct article usage
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product
irrespective of its need. Gor
instance, an Correct your spelling
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years back which showed Correct article usage
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. Hence
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Moving further
, many times large organisations hire famous actors to promote their product
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the attention
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For instance
, a set of plastic microwave containers were advertised by a famous sportsperson , regardless of having its
knowledge that consuming food in plastic containers are not good for health.
To conclude, though Correct pronoun usage
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