Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays humankind thinks we should take care of all wild animals while others could argue that we should protect some kinds. In
this
essay I will demonstrate 2 main ideas that oppose each other, as well as, I will mention in my personal statements.
First
thing first
, our planet is based on a complex animal, bacteria ecosystem
. If one of them vanishes, it would cause ecosystem
distortion and inequality. Let's take an example of one kind of animal, If one of the mammals are going to die off, predators who consume their meats are spontaneous will vanish off from the ecosystem
simultaneously. This
cause a gap between the life cycle of the earth as well as the earth will collapse.
If we see the second
perspective, such
as we take care just some kind of animals. In order to focus on the ecosystem
, we always remember that we don't rule the earth. If things going to happen, it would happen sooner or later. We should not only just accept that it is just a natural inhabitant but also
it is part of the nature of life.
To sum up, everything that has been stated so far, If we focus on a few kinds of animals, we could cause natural phenomena. Even though we don't care about some of them. In order to argue that idea my perspective is we should equally target all animal kinds if we have the capability to spotlight all of them. But not mess with the ecosystem
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite