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Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foriegn country. Others think that they should live as a seperate minority group with the different life style. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some masses believe that accepting
culture
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 of a new
country
 after migrating there is a good thing while others think they should live as a separate community. In the coming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views and share my opinion. Migrating to another
country
 for a job or any other reason and accepting their
culture
 can put sometimes a tremendous amount of challenge.
However
, it is important to adapt to their
culture
 because it helps them to get mixed with each other easily.
Besides
 that after accepting their
tradition
 and
culture
, one will not feel homesick as they feel at home. Taking part in their
tradition
 gives a sense of security and confidence to survive in that
country
.
Moreover
, when an individual is accepting their
culture
, the fellow
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countrymen
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country men
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 will accept and give love in return.
Secondly
, they should make their own community too as they should not forget their own
tradition
. Practising their own
tradition
 and
culture
 in another
country
 is not a sinful act. When there is any festival, they can celebrate together and it will make them feel at home. Another aspect is that, If anyone needs someone in a difficult time, they can come together and help the one who is in need.
On the other hand
, keeping own
culture
 and
tradition
 alive is
also
 essential. It
give
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sense
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 of identity.
Additionally
, own
culture
 provides
comforts
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comfort
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 and confidence. Individuals
also
 can avoid
culture
 shock by living as
separate
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a separate
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 minority
group
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groups
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 with
own
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their own
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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. In conclusion, I agree with both that people should adapt
culture
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the culture
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 of another
country
 and at the same , the time they should make minor community
also
.
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