Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

New technologies have
provide
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more and more options for watching
movies
where and when you want. In
now days
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, you can watch
movies
on
you
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smartphone
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smart phone
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or tablet. So, many people
are argue
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that
,
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it is no longer necessary to go to the theatre to enjoy films. But, others
are believe
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that
movies
should be watched in a
cinema
hall to truly enjoy them. In my opinion, I think cinemas offer an unparalleled
experience
because not every
movie
can be enjoyed on
the
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small screens
such
as
smart phone
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and
tablet
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. On one hand, when a person has a phone or tablet, it is easier to watch
movies
and other entertainment in a comfortable area. If the viewer has a portable device, that person can select a more convenient time and location.
Also
, he or she can even take breaks in between and resume the show later.
Moreover
, many mobile apps like Netflix, Amazon Prime Video, Hulu and Disney + allow people to watch any newly released
movie
with a nominal monthly subscription fee.
Also
, They offer a large number of
movies
.
On the other hand
, watching a
movie
in a theatre lets you see a film on a huge screen with
penalty
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of details. it
also
offer
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a surround sound system that enhances the overall
experience
making you feel as if you are actually part of the story.
Therefore
, when you are watching a
movie
at a
cinema
hall, you actually can enjoy it without any kind of
disturbances
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. As in
cinema
hall
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everybody comes to watch a
movie
and there is no chance of getting disturbed or pausing the
movie
in between unlike in our homes. In my
opinion
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I like to watch
movies
in the
cinema
. Because
,
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I think it helps us create new memories. And people go to
movie
theatres because it's fun. The
experience
should be enjoyable and allow you to tell later whether you really enjoyed it. So I personally think it creates new memories ​rather than watching
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movie
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from home. In conclusion,the
web stream
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gives the user an uninterrupted
experience
, but the theatrical
experience
makes the audience feel satisfied. I believe that watching
movies
in a
cinema
gives a person a relaxing
experience
.
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  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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