Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am grateful for your hardworking to organize school trips for

students

. I have seen your notice in

schools’

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the schools’

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newspaper regarding volunteer

parent

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to accompany

students

during the trip. The country you are planning to take

students

to is my hometown. I have been living in Mexico for more than twenty years.

Hence

, I am familiar with all the touristic destinations which help

students

to enjoy their journey and gain some experience.

In addition

, I was an organizer on the

last

trip so my relationship with

students

is highly strong which helps to have a better understanding of each other. I would appreciate

if

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you provide me with

the

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apply

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detail

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information regarding the accommodation so I can arrange some activities for the children.

Also

, I am willing to provide some healthy food for

students

to boost their energy,

therefore

, I require the exact number of

students

and if anyone has food allergies or not. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dorna Sadeghi