Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The given bar chart compares a country’s

exports

in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table attached with it gives us the exact figures by which the

exports

in each category have either increased or decreased. Five main varieties of goods are considered here. The value of

exports

in almost all sectors went up in 2016 except for gems and jewellery. Petroleum product

exports

increased by 3% while that of engineered goods grossed a rise of 8.5%. Agricultural products

also

showcased an increase in sales but only of a meagre 0.81%. But, textiles was the category which displayed a staggering rise in the value of 15.24% 

On the other hand

, the only sector that did not perform as well as that in 2015 was Gems and jewellery which lost its value by 5.18%. To sum up, it seems that

this

country’s export sales were better in 2016 as compared to those in 2015 except for that in one category of products.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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162 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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