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Some people think happiness is only caused by financial success, other thinks that there are other factors involved in happiness

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There are several studies that proved that
money
 alone cannot buy
happiness
. Some
people
 feel that other things are
also
 necessary to live a joyful
life
. I will be discussing both statements in the following paragraphs which will provide a clear picture
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 these points.
People
 feel delighted when they succeed in terms of
money
. There are several reasons why they consider
money
 to be the most important part of their
life
.
To begin
 with, financial freedom plays a vital role as it helps
people
 to buy whatever they wish to have .
Also
, with the help of ,
money
 one can do charity for the welfare of society which in turn provides divine
happiness
. On the other way round, there are several other reasons to be happy.
Firstly
, good health plays an important role than wealth as we all know that “Health is Wealth”.
Secondly
, family support and togetherness give more
happiness
.
Also
, living peaceful
life
 can be helpful.
In addition
 to that, achievement of the things in terms of any qualification or an appointment letter from a company that one is dreaming of will give an abundance of gladness to a person. Worshipping God and helping others is a divine source of
happiness
 that
money
 alone cannot buy. To conclude, no doubt with
money
 we can buy luxuries of
life
 but utilizing that
money
 in donation, aids or welfare of society will together give more
happiness
 to
people
.
Therefore
,
money
 alone cannot buy
happiness
 because if a person is not living a healthy
life
then
 he will not be glad no matter how much
money
 he owns.
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