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Describe how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write 150 words

#instant #noodles #information #features #comparisons
The diagram below shows the full
process
 of how instant
noodles
 will be produced. Overall, what can
bee
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 seen is that
,
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apply
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 instant
noodles
 are manufactured with consist of 8
variety
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 of stages from storage silos
till
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to
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 the labelling
.
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To begin
 with, the
process
 begins with storage silos from arriving with
flour
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the flour
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 car model. After having
storaged
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storage
, it arrives
to
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at
in
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 the mixing
process
with
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by
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 adding oil and water before having both dough sheets and strips.
With
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After
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 completing these steps,
then
 they are directed automatically to the fifth step called
Noodles
 Discs. After
that
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 they are met with
cooking
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the cooking
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 stage with oil and the drying stage too. Finishing
this
process
 they are put into cups and
send
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sent
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 to
adding
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add
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 vegetables and spices as well. In the
last
process
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 they are met with labelling and sealing stages in order to
being
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 prepared to put them into labels.
Finishing
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After finishing
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 all of these mentioned processes Instant
noodles
 are ready to be used.
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