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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

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These days, life expectancy is one of the important factors in many developed
countries
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. There are pros and cons in deciding on an average period that a person may expect to live, though I believe the rise of expectance in living may lead to the extinction of humans. One of the clearest advantages here is country improvements. Most of the
countries
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 with high rates in LE are the most developed
countries
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, a good
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 of
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 are European
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, the USA etcetera.
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 when people have more time for living, they work harder to
fulfill
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 their basic needs and come up with a plan for their future which
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 to make
profit
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 to expand the economy. So if life expectancy grows sharply, in terms of economy we will be victorious.
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, nowadays there are serious disadvantages that many people are suffering from them which can be linked to the
population
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 decline of the
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. Having been experienced a long life in a
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population
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, inhabitants of the earth need more and more food. So we have to provide more food sources for them and due to not having enough lands for farming and a useful transportation system many people in distinct
countries
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 of the African continent and other sides of the
world
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 are suffering from food shortage which leads to a considerable reduction in their
population
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. To conclude,
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 a rise in a LE can have a certain negative impact on the
population
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, it has an extremely positive influence on the
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 and
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the country`s
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 economy. I believe that these benefits outweigh
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 drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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