In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

These days, life expectancy is one of the important factors in many developed

countries

. There are pros and cons in deciding on an average period that a person may expect to live, though I believe the rise of expectance in living may lead to the extinction of humans. One of the clearest advantages here is country improvements. Most of the

countries

with high rates in LE are the most developed

countries

, a good

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of

this

are European

countries

, the USA etcetera.

Also

when people have more time for living, they work harder to

fulfill

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their basic needs and come up with a plan for their future which

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to make

profit

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to expand the economy. So if life expectancy grows sharply, in terms of economy we will be victorious.

However

, nowadays there are serious disadvantages that many people are suffering from them which can be linked to the

population

decline of the

world

. Having been experienced a long life in a

world

population

, inhabitants of the earth need more and more food. So we have to provide more food sources for them and due to not having enough lands for farming and a useful transportation system many people in distinct

countries

of the African continent and other sides of the

world

are suffering from food shortage which leads to a considerable reduction in their

population

. To conclude,

although

a rise in a LE can have a certain negative impact on the

population

, it has an extremely positive influence on the

world

and

country`s

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economy. I believe that these benefits outweigh

its

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their

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drawbacks.