Explain why you intend to pursue your masters in finance studies at this time.?

When I was a little girl at school I always asked my mother -singing the Que Sera - song …Ma -what will I be ..will be….my mother replied you will be a rich girl like your dad. What does dad do Ma..?…”
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” mom replied. From that time I knew I was destined to study
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. I used to keep awake every single night just to hear papa’s footsteps in the corridor sometimes feeble sometimes tromping. though dad dragged himself after a day’s hard work. I would sleep only after hearing the old man’s loud laughter when he shared his success stories with mom, but sometimes it was
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unbroken silence. I often questioned my mother but never got a clear answer,
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my father told me there were bad days and good days in
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and the show must go on. Eventually, when I came to know of the huge loss in our family
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that I decided to take up
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in financial
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and
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. Complying with laws and regulations at all levels (local, state, national, and in other countries where my company operates). My
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step in pursuing the goal was my graduation .I took the BSE course ( Bombay stock exchange course) through which I got to know how much I love studying
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finance and investments. I have always believed in the expression “where there is a will, there is a way. ” I was by
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strongly inclined towards having a career in finance and
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.Example doing a post-graduation in Financial
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,what better place than the MCGILL I concluded.
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preparing for
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level to boost my skills.
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, my teachers have always said I really know how to apply myself—especially when faced with something new and particularly demanding.
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suffered a loss because there were no calculations done. Mathematics of Finance is of the utmost importance” , echoed in my ears ,from the college lectures-which could help me translate a value today into a value at some future point in time and calculate the outcome of the investment made. Perhaps
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should help me manage
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in financial investments. I think
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why I have chosen one of the best colleges in Canada - the McGill University and it provides the Master’s which I always wanted to pursue to achieve my goals and NEVER have to face financial distress. My mentors always quoted John Adams “There are two types of education…. One should teach us how to make a living, and the other how to live.” Who would not want to achieve both? In conclusion, having graduated from the best in the financial industry, with an opportunity to work with Desautels focused on sustainable investments and financial
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, will help me determine which risks to accept, which to neutralize, and which to transfer. Eventually, I will know how to do everything, financially. We'll see it from tomorrow on and it will be, will be that which has to be…”Que Sera Sera.”

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