Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.

The
table
illustrates the proportion of households with durables in Britania between 1972 and 1983. Overall, it can be seen that many people in Britania used nearly 100 % with television around more than 92% since 1972 until the end of the period in 1983. In 1972, The population in
this
city consumed durables with tv, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, cell phones and central heating with the share of 93%, 87%, 73%, 66%, 42% and 37% respectively. by contrast, Households were not consumed with video and dishwashers
this
year
. According to the
table
, In 1978, people in Britania already started to know about the dishwasher, So they were consumed with it about 3% in
this
year
. At the end of the
year
in the followed
table
, The proportion of durables was dramatically increased in some things
such
as central heating and telephone from 37% and 42% to 64% and 77% respectively,
additionally
, from the
,
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apply
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table
it has any changed the percentage of durable with slight growth from television, refrigerator, washing machine and dishwasher.
Moreover
, The consumption of video
initiate
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initiates
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for using in some households with 18 % in
this
year
.
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