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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this issue?

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Life is a journey; in which people has to overcome certain circumstances which make them flourish or perish in their battle of life. In one view, if a child of a family is doing some kind of paid
work
 for which their living circumstances might be responsible, where
children
 get to know the value of
money
,
work
. Whereas
on the other hand
, making the
children
 do the paid
work
 is not more than misleading their career
instead
 of holding the looks in a hand, they are working for their daily wages. So on
this
 issue, there is a positive side and a negative side. Nowadays, people are intentionally encouraging their
children
 to do some
works
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 and get
money
 for their daily needs. They are working in the restaurants as waiters, servers in a shop, in the shops etc
instead
 of going to the school and getting some knowledge. Though there is a massive development in technology, awareness in
the
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society, there are some
children
 who are completely unaware of their surrounding things which are happening.
However
, the circumstances of a family make their
children
work
 for
money
, which brings food for their family by working at
the
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 early age
children
 will come to know about many things,
for instance
, the responsibility of a family, the value of
money
 and
work
 experience which makes them tackle any kind of situation.
Therefore
, it is not possible to judge a child who performs paid
work
. But, a change can be brought in the
children
’s perspective and his/her family by offering them some kind of jobs or
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, which should be done by the government.
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  • Exploitation
  • Minimum age
  • Work experience
  • Survival
  • Taking responsibility
  • Education
  • Poverty
  • Legal restrictions
  • Physical toll
  • Psychological impact
  • Cultural perceptions
  • International conventions
  • Economic impact
  • Work-study programs
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