Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

People

have preferences of living in

a

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independent

house

or an

apartment

and it depends upon the comfort

and

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family size and

income

.

However

,others say that living in a flat has more outcomes,I agree. In

this

essay,I will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of living in a

house

or

an

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residential building.

People

who

are reside

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in the condo buildings have more positives because of the close community.

Firstly

,most

people

desire to live in a flat because of

the

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safety reasons.

For instance

,avoiding risks of thefts and robberies.

Moreover

,

families

think to stay in

the

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safe neighbourhood

,

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and

making

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sure that there are no incidents or accidents are

happened

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in the area.

Secondly

,to commute different places for work or study students and family runners always prefer to stay in cities or towns. To illustrate

this

,

people

who are using public transport to travel from city to midtown area.

Furthermore

, for commuting reasons residing residential flats are more nice and comfortable.

Finally

,it depends upon the family size,

income

are

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two contributing factors because a person

need

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a

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capability of running expenses of living.

Such

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as basic expenses,living costs,rent and electricity and

income

of the family members.

This

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basic needs are sources and compulsory to

fulfill

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the wants of staying in

house

or

apartment

.

Neverthless

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Nevertheless

,others say that they have more comfort zone in living in

a independent villas

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an independent villa

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because of the large

families

.

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as

,

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joint

families

who have two or three with

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grandparents

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grand parents

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grandparents

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enjoy

to stay

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staying

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in a

house

. In the same way,recently they are changes in the housing market and

rise

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a rise

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in mortgages. Due to

this

reason,

public

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with lower

income

levels are unable to afford homes, but

instead

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they are

prefering

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preferring

to live in

the

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condo or

apartment

buildings. In conclusion,

although

there are many outcomes of living in a flat or an

apartment

, depending upon the comfort zone and status,

families

have different perspectives and tastes,choices of living.