Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People believe that young ones need to listen

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rules and regulations of their elders and teachers desire to be. While others say that

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children

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a

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independence and self-control in solving problems,I agree. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides and give

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opinion. On the one hand,parents who are not controlled too much and give them

choice

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of choosing alternatives have more outcomes, because they can resolve the problems and issues easily.

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behavioral

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and psychological impacts which are cognitive and mental abilities. To illustrate

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,youngsters are quick in

decision-making

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process and analysing

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future plans in education and jobs.

On the other hand

, caregivers who control their

children

have some drawbacks in problem-solving and doing independent work in the future because of

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of motivation.

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, a child needs

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initiation to develop skills,

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as

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or solving a puzzle.

Furthermore

,controlling too much can impact

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behavioural issues.

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children

need to build

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confidence and self-esteem,

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helps them to gain

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confidence and positive behaviour.

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as

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poor concentration

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anxiety,depression.

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can be avoided by using

developmental

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appropriate activities which are used as

curriculum based

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learning.

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controlled kids have some drawbacks when they grow

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later

ages

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. To illustrate

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, individuals can face negative outcomes to deal

situations

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in and around

community

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because of

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too much dependency.

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,folks have fear of implementing work that can result to get anger and frustrations of results. To conclude,teachers and caregivers who keep expecting that their

children

need to listen and apply in practical life can have some problems in later life. Whereas,people who are living decisions for their child have better future expectancy.