You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter because I have received my credit card statement, and the expense was not made by me. I, Swati Arora, a member of your HDFC Bank since 2003 have a savings account along with a registered credit card.

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, I want you to draw your attention to the listed items which I did not purchase,

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, showing in the current month statement sum of Rs 2,50,000.

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includes a mobile phone worth Rs 1,50000, and a laptop of Rs 100,000, purchased on the 22nd of

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month.

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, it would be great if you organize an investigation on

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serious matter, and find the culprit who had misused my card.

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, you people should log a complaint on my behalf and share the complaint number with me as well else I have to go for legal proceedings as

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is fraudulent activity. I hope I will get a quick resolution in

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case. Yours Sincerely, Swati Arora

swatiarora1992Fri Jan 21 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

163 words

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