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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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 versatility for a majority of the people to spend
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 related
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very huge fame in all the ages because many of these stories are based on true incidents. I
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 of dramas to watch because of
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their
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the
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 flow. Primarily, the interest of people has diverted from outdoor activities to these novels and TV shows
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 a huge extent. A
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category
 of
this
 mode of entertainment provides
content
 related to murders, robberies, and massacres.The novels and shows related
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 these are usually based on real past events.
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, these things
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 eagerness in viewers to know exact planning done culprits and the actions taken by securities in revert. To exemplify: A movie named "26/11" which referred
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terrorist
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 in Taj Hotel and several other
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Mumbai,
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got
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huge acclaim from the viewers.
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 I am not indulged
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 watching TV
seriels
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series
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 and novels regularly, the
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 movies give me goosebumps because of
thier
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their
 creative writing. These
story
 writers arrange the events in
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 innovative way to contrast
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 with the present as well as with the past
occurences
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occurrences
. These things not only inculcate suspense but
also
 induce a zeal in
viewer's
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 mind to know the
further
story
.
This
 type of
content
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 of countries. Evidently, 40% of film awards are given to
such
 movies because of their
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 and the style of depiction. In conclusion, Crime related
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leisure time because of its
resemblence
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resemblance
 to real incidents and
thier
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their
 artistic writing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
  • antagonist
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