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In the past, museums stored information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found through the Internet, so there is no need for museums. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

#museums #information #culture #history #internet
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The supplied diagram highlights the information with regard to the production of frozen
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 pies. According to the diagram, we can observe that
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 a
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 is composed of several ingredients. A more detailed look at
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 process affords to infer that at
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, we should take a microwaveable container.
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, we need to prepare ingredients by means of which we are going to cook. We should take peas,
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, sauce and potatoes. After that, we are ready to produce a
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. At the beginning of production, we need to pour the sauce
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 the microwaveable container. Onwards, we take a
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, cut down it and mix
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 pieces with the sauce.
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, we add peas and potatoes, which are chopped into circles.
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 noteworthy is that potatoes should locate above the rest of the ingredients across the
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. Ultimately, we put a product into a microwave and expect when the
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pie
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 will be ready.
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