In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Inclination
toward fictional novels and dramas based on Add an article
The inclination
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crime
incidents has become much more popular in the last
one
decade. A group of Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
are watching such
shows to make themselves aware of such
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incidentsCorrect your spelling
heinous
,
so that Remove the comma
apply
such
problems do not arise to them. In my opinion, though these types of program
will make Fix the agreement mistake
programs
people
aware, that can have a negative impact on youth.
To embark on, as per the present condition, people
are supposed to take care of themselves due to increasing
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the increasing
crime
rate. People
can know in details
about the procedure and Fix the agreement mistake
detail
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loopholes
loop holes
of the same by reading books or watching Correct your spelling
loopholes
such
television program
. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
These
helps them to make Correct pronoun usage
This
learn
about the consequences of doing criminal activities. Change the form of the verb
learning
Moreover
, this
vivid audio visual
presentation and detailed Correct your spelling
audiovisual
narated
description Correct your spelling
narrated
helps
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help
people
to get rid occurance
of Correct your spelling
occurrence
such
incidents with them. When people
read fictional novels they become well aware of criminal
mind and their activities which in the long run helps them to survive in Add an article
the criminal
the
society. In Correct article usage
apply
this
case, it is worth mentioning that a TV program
namely "Crime
files" has helped in reducing the banking OTP(one time
password) fraud as Add a hyphen
one-time
people
became aware of that. Thus
, it is evident that these helped people
to save their money from such
fraud; therefore
, people
are watching such
programs.
On the other hand
, such
crime
scene
may have a negative impact on the mind of adolescents. Fix the agreement mistake
scenes
This
violent video or descrpitive
narration may have a negative impact on their growing minds and can lead to Correct your spelling
descriptive
a
trauma even. Remove the article
apply
In addition
to this
, they may become involved in juvenile activities when they face shortage
of pocket money. To mitigate the crunch of money they may plan for robbery in the same way as shown Add an article
a shortage
in
TV. Illustration can be given, just a few months ago, a bank robbery took place in Allahabad in the same way as shown in "Sabdhan India." The dark side of Change preposition
on
this
is the less.
To conclude, telecasted program
and written Fix the agreement mistake
programs
story books
on Correct your spelling
storybooks
crime
make people
well aware in advance from
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of
such
mishappening; however
, young
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the young
mind
may become muddy and prone to Fix the agreement mistake
minds
felony
by applying those Add an article
a felony
formula
of Fix the agreement mistake
formulas
crime
. In my opinion, this
types
of telecasting should be restricted to awareness only, Fix the agreement mistake
type
detailed
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the detailed
a detailed
procedure
must not Fix the agreement mistake
procedures
be
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revel
have reveled
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revelled
reveled
.Correct your spelling
revealed
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