In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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toward fictional novels and dramas based on

crime

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incidents has become much more popular in the

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one

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decade. A group of

people

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are watching

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shows to make themselves aware of

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henious

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heinous

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so that

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problems do not arise to them. In my opinion, though these types of

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program

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will make

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aware, that can have a negative impact on youth. To embark on, as per the present condition,

people

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are supposed to take care of themselves due to

increasing

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crime

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rate.

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can know in

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about the procedure and

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loopholes

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loop holes

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of the same by reading books or watching

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television

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program

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programs

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helps them to make

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about the consequences of doing criminal activities.

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vivid

audio visual

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presentation and detailed

narated

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narrated

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helps

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people

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to get rid

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occurrence

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incidents with them. When

people

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read fictional novels they become well aware of

criminal

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the criminal

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mind and their activities which in the long run helps them to survive in

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society. In

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case, it is worth mentioning that a TV

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namely "

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files" has helped in reducing the banking OTP(

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password) fraud as

people

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became aware of that.

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, it is evident that these helped

people

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to save their money from

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fraud;

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people

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are watching

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programs.

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such

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crime

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scene

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may have a negative impact on the mind of adolescents.

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violent video or

descrpitive

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descriptive

narration may have a negative impact on their growing minds and can lead to

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trauma even.

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, they may become involved in juvenile activities when they face

shortage

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of pocket money. To mitigate the crunch of money they may plan for robbery in the same way as shown

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TV. Illustration can be given, just a few months ago, a bank robbery took place in Allahabad in the same way as shown in "Sabdhan India." The dark side of

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is the less. To conclude, telecasted

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program

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programs

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and written

story books

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storybooks

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crime

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make

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well aware in advance

from

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such

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mishappening;

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young

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mind

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minds

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may become muddy and prone to

felony

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a felony

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by applying those

formula

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crime

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. In my opinion,

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types

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of telecasting should be restricted to awareness only,

detailed

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the detailed

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procedure

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must not

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revel

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reveled

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

383 words

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phenomenon
intrigue
enigma
compelling
addictive
chilling
forensics
procedural
thriller
suspense
psychological
criminalistics
deviant
intricate
red herrings
misdirection
sardonically
socioeconomic
catharsis
moral ambiguity
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protagonist
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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Discuss the ethical implications of always telling the truth, even in difficult situations. What are advantages and disadvantages of this statement.

Smoking should be banned in all public places even though it would restrict some of other people’s freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some employers want to be able to contact their staff all the time including holidays. Do you think the advantages of this are more than its disadvantages?