unemployment is one of the biggest problem of contempory society. What do you think are the main cause of unemployment.what Solutions can you suggest?
Now a days
, there is a biggest difficult situation,due to lack of job in the modern societies. Correct the word
Nowadays
This
essay will discuss about
the causes of Remove the preposition
apply
this
problem along with possible solutions to elevate them.
To commence with, one of main
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the main
reason
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reasons
of
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for
this
problem is the upcoming technological devices. New
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The new
machinary
system has been updated in most areas of the world. To explicate it, in factories almost work has been done by instruments and tools function because it can Correct your spelling
machinery
worked
for many and more hours. Change the verb form
work
For instance
, a survey was conducted by workers department and found that,
most of the people are jobless due to the current Remove the comma
apply
mechanisum
system. To solve it, the government should give Correct your spelling
mechanism
opportunity
to jobless persons who Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
requires
money for their daily uses in life.
Probing Change the verb form
require
further
, another cause of the difficulty is lack of education because in rural
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a rural
area
, studies are not available for children and they became jobless in their future. To explain it, companies needs Fix the agreement mistake
areas
of
appropriate employment who are educated and do some benefits in Change preposition
apply
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the work
work place
. Correct your spelling
workplace
However
due to uneducated people, Add a comma
,However
government
will not give Add an article
the government
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the job
a job
job
to Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
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the person
person
. Fix the agreement mistake
people
For example
, an article was published in ‘The Hindu’ in year
2019, revealed that there are many unemployed Change the article
the year
person
because of their Change to a plural noun
people
uncomplete
qualification. Correct your spelling
incomplete
Hence
, it can solve by giving free education provides in countryside area and in needy
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a needy
area
.
To concludeFix the agreement mistake
areas
it
, unemployment has detrimental effects on Correct pronoun usage
apply
individual
because of Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
new
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the new
mechanary
system and lack of Correct your spelling
machinery
educate
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educating
employes
. So government should think about Correct your spelling
employees
to give
proper education to every mankind and start companies where Change the verb form
giving
worker
can Add an article
a worker
the worker
works
rather Change the verb form
work
then
technology.Replace the word
than
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