unemployment is one of the biggest problem of contempory society. What do you think are the main cause of unemployment.what Solutions can you suggest?

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, there is a biggest difficult situation,due to lack of job in the modern societies.
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the causes of
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problem along with possible solutions to elevate them. To commence with, one of
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reason
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of
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this
problem is the upcoming technological devices.
New
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machinary
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machinery
system has been updated in most areas of the world. To explicate it, in factories almost work has been done by instruments and tools function because it can
worked
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for many and more hours.
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, a survey was conducted by workers department and found that
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most of the people are jobless due to the current
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system. To solve it, the government should give
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to jobless persons who
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money for their daily uses in life. Probing
further
, another cause of the difficulty is lack of education because in
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a rural
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area
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, studies are not available for children and they became jobless in their future. To explain it, companies needs
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appropriate employment who are educated and do some benefits in
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work place
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.
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due to uneducated people,
government
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the government
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will not give
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the job
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job
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jobs
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to
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the person
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person
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people
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.
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, an article was published in ‘The Hindu’ in
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2019, revealed that there are many unemployed
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because of their
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qualification.
Hence
, it can solve by giving free education provides in countryside area and in
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a needy
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area
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. To conclude
it
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, unemployment has detrimental effects on
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because of
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mechanary
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machinery
system and lack of
educate
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employes
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employees
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. So government should think about
to give
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proper education to every mankind and start companies where
worker
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a worker
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can
works
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rather
then
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technology.
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