You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir or Madam Manager, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to a serious problem I faced during my stay in your

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last

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week. Let me start by providing some details about the occurred. Considering the time of the year, which is Autumn, I would assume that the

hotel

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is prepared for any unnormal weather conditions,

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as extremely colder temperatures.

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, what I and other clients went through were rooms and

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facilities with no adequate heating system. As to actions made to overcome

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issue, we had to void other areas of the

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rather than our rooms and cover ourselves with more clothes. To have a proper sleep, two additional blankets were provided, which was quite efficient to keep us warm,

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it was very uncomfortable to sleep with all that weight on us.

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, I would appreciate it if the

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initiates an inspection of the heating system to avoid any

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problems in severe winter, as well as a formal apology from the

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owner to all the clients staying at the

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during that period. I looking forward to a response regarding

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issue. Yours faithfully, Christina Smith

gislainemelegaSat Jan 22 2022

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

198 words

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