the maps below show the center of a small town called lslip it is now, and plans for development
The 2 maps compare the layout of the
centre
of a small town called Lslip in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main change is to demolish the main road and the northern shops to make a room for the car park, shopping centre
and bus station and also
construct a dual carriageway around the centre
of the map.
According to
a current map centre
of the town will be expanded in the future
plan. Main
road and the northern shops will be demolished to make a room for new facilities (bus station, shopping Add an article
The main
centre
and car park) to accommodate citizen needs and new housing and pedestrian’s
path for people who Change noun form
pedestrian
likes
to walk. Change the verb form
like
Moreover
, while
the southern shop maintains in the future
development, the park will become smaller to make a room for new housing. We also
can notice that school
become bigger in the Fix the agreement mistake
schools
future
plan. Furthermore
, in the future
plan
a dual carriageway will be constructed around Lsilp’s Add a comma
,plan
centre
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