the maps below show the center of a small town called lslip it is now, and plans for development

The 2 maps compare the layout of the

centre

of a small town called Lslip in its current form and its proposed expansion.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the main change is to demolish the main road and the northern shops to make a room for the car park, shopping

centre

and bus station and

also

construct a dual carriageway around the

centre

of the map.

According to

a current map

centre

of the town will be expanded in the

future

plan.

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road and the northern shops will be demolished to make a room for new facilities (bus station, shopping

centre

and car park) to accommodate citizen needs and new housing and

pedestrian’s

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path for people who

likes

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to walk.

Moreover

,

while

the southern shop maintains in the

future

development, the park will become smaller to make a room for new housing. We

also

can notice that

school

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become bigger in the

future

plan.

Furthermore

, in the

future

plan

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a dual carriageway will be constructed around Lsilp’s

centre

.