Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

As the world is going to be more globalized, more
people
decide to immigrate to other countries. These
people
need to adapt themselves to the destination country and integrate with local ones but
this
does not mean that they have to abandon all their own
culture
and histories. In stark contrast with what some
people
think, there is not any conflict between
cultures
. Owning a new
culture
does not mean that
one
should give up the older
one
or he
/
she can have just
one
of them.
For instance
, in a country like Iran which includes too many different
cultures
and languages and can be imagined like a small world, There are many
people
that changed their cities
for example
a Turk can migrate to a Kurd city and live among a totally different society. He
/
she will and should learn their language in order to connect better with them and of ,course he
/
she will involve in their ceremonies, cultural behaviours and special gatherings and live life stand by them, in the meantime remember his
/
her own
culture
and even sometimes talk about it with local
people
and maybe invite them to some of his cultural ceremonies.
Moreover
, the whole idea of globalization is not about being unified, it is about living side by side with all differences. There is beauty in differences that can not be replaced with anything.
Cultures
can be learned from each other and vast their activities. If in France
people
fest the
first
of July and in Italy they do it at the end of April, a french the immigrated to Italy can have both festivals and you can not deny that it is even a big advantage to have more reasons for celebration. As
people
believe in inequality, as they do not level various races and
cultures
there will not be any problem to have more than
one
culture
. No
one
should be isolated just for his
/
her different background.
Also
, no
one
should separate him
/
herself in order to maintain his
/
her
culture
untouched. Life would be easier if everyone knows that at the end of the day all of us as human beings are far more identical than different.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration
  • integration
  • social cohesion
  • cultural clashes
  • original culture
  • diversity
  • identity loss
  • psychological distress
  • balanced approach
  • local customs
  • cultural identities
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