Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Several health issues are caused by manufactured food and drink that contain high levels of
sugar
. Some believe that their prices should be increased to persuade
people
to lower their consumption of
sugar
. In my opinion,
instead
of raising the prices, other measures should be introduced to help cope with the problem.
First
,
tax
should play an important role to help deal with the health problem of overconsuming
sugar
.
For instance
, in Thailand, the government requires each manufacturer to pay taxes according to the level of
sugar
in their products, the more
sugar
, the higher
tax
, and vice versa.
As a result
, each manufacturer needs to reduce their
sugar
level in order to pay less
tax
and keep their price stable and competitive in the market. Another solution is to encourage
people
to do more physical activities.
For example
, parks, gyms, playgrounds and other sports facilities should be provided by government or local authorities and
people
should be able to access them without charges.
In contrast
, nowadays, most
people
spend their weekends going to shopping malls because not enough public spaces are available.
This
finally
results in
people
gaining weight because the majority of
people
spend less time exercising. In conclusion, in my opinion,
people
should not be responsible for higher prices of sugary products,
instead
, the government should introduce a more effective measure to lessen the
sugar
level of products by using
tax
, while at the same time, providing more public spaces
such
as parks and gyms that
people
can use for exercising.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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