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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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One of the most significant issues that many
people
 of today's society are very concerned
for
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 is
the
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health
. It is said that
,
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people
 who have a reasonable
diet
, do exercise every day and avoid stress could keep their
health
 in good every time.
This
 essay will discuss some ways for
people
 to stay healthy.
First
 of all,
sports
 activities are one of the best ways to keep
people
's bodies fit. There are many kinds of
sports
 which could suitable for each person
such
 as yoga, gym, cycle or swim.
For example
, office workers could have a plan for a swim after a long working day, which will help them to relax their
body
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.
Hence
, office workers not only release stress but
also
 do the job better.
In addition
, a good
diet
 is very necessary to improve
health
.
Although
 most
people
 have aware of the benefits of
good
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diet
, many
people
 still choose fast foods for their meals because of time-saving.
Moreover
, eating good foods will help
people
 to avoid
the
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cancers which consume a lot of time and money to cure. In conclusion, a good
diet
 and
sports
 activities have shown many benefits for healthy
people
. By planning a reasonable schedule for work, meals and
sports
,
people
 will improve their basic body and mental
health
 significantly.
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