Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays there are many visitors who travel in areas with
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dangerous conditions like the Everest mountain or Alpes.
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tendency has a definite advantage of exploring remoting regions.
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, it is an activity that gives the opportunity to people to broaden their horizons and reach their limits. In my personal experience, when I hiked on Olympus mountain 3 years ago, I reached and discovered areas that few folks would ever see in their lives. Apart from that, what I learned from
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adventure is that when you push yourself you can understand your physical and emotional strength.
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, I would never know that I could live with just a few food and water as well as under extreme circumstances.
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, make me appreciate my everyday life.
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, because of the conditions which prevail in these remote ,places there are
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many travellers who lose their life or get injured. A clear illustration of
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could be said to be that recent research from proponent professors in Greece, has shown that 10% of people who climb on Olympus mountain die every year. So, I would say that, if someone wants to hike or visit
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as remoted areas, should be well enough prepared and informed about the paths, dangers and conditions. To sum up, I believe that in reality, the advantages and disadvantages resemble two sides of one coin, which usually runs parallel. On one hand, we as a community can not forbid
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kind of tourism and the dangers can only be eliminated by the concerted effort of tourists.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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