You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter Describe the problem with the jacket. Explain what happened when you tried to return it. Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir, Hope you are well. I am writing

this

letter to express my sadness about

previous

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shop from your

store

. I had bought a

jacket

, but when I came

to

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home

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the home

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, I have realized it was damaged very

bad

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badly

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. It was impossible to wear. When I was in

store

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the store

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, I haven'

t

controlled the

jacket

totally.

However

, I tried to wear

at

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it at

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home, I couldn'

t

wear it because of

zipper

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the zipper

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is not working. It was broken.

Also

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there

were

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some white

blemish

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on the arms of the

jacket

. After I discovered these problems, I went to your

store

last

Tuesday. I have talked with your

store

associate. She told me, because of discounts, we can'

t

return any of

products

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. Though, I couldn'

t

return my damaged product. As a being consumer, I request you to change my damaged

jacket

with

new

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a new

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one. I like your

store

and I do shop quite often from your

store

. Nobody can wear

this

jacket

with

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in

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current

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its current

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condition. I would be very glad if you change my product. Sincerely, Ezgi Koçak