you are going on a short course to a training college abroad. it is college that you have not been to before write a letter to the accomodation officer in your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date, explain your accomodation needs, ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that, I will attend the course Business Communication which will be held from 26th Feb 2022 to 29 Feb 2022 at Concordia University. I will arrive in the morning on 25th Feb 2022. It is a request, could you please provide me with the details of accommodation. I need one separate room which has an attached bathroom, if it is possible or

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, I can share it with one partner.

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, I would like to know the way of payment, is it possible to use a visa card. Apart from

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, I have one question regarding transportation, how I can reach from the accommodation to the college do you have any private buses, or do I have to use some other public transportation. It could be appreciated if you will help in. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and effort in making accommodation for me. Yours Sincerely, Jaswinder.

Roshandeepkaur88Sun Jan 23 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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