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Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the students' home country? Will this trend change much in the future.

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massive
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 exodus of students to outside
countries
 in search of educational knowledge and specialised skill acquisition due to the relative flexibility and
cost effective
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overseas
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oversees
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.
This
 has brought
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a lot
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 of negative impact to the homeland and
such
 trend if not discouraged will escalate in the near future. There is no denying the importance of comprehensive education and training in
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 carrier brought about through
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 of ideas and information from
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 specialized
field
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 around the world.
However
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trend
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 which tends to favour the migration of intellects to foreign
countries
 in search of learning can result in brain drain which will affect the home country negatively.
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alot
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a lot
 of tertiary institutions in developing
nations
 do not have standardized learning facilities for some professional degrees including, medicine, pharmacy and nursing. As
such
 most students who eventually travel abroad
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 do not return home after securing good jobs leading to
deficit
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 of human resources.
In addition
 to
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, even though it has become relatively cheaper, studying in a foreign land is still quite expensive especially by
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a student
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student
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students
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 from
third
 world
countries
. Parents who are able to achieve
this
 for their children invest huge
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 of money yearly for tuition fees and other levies thereby reducing the standard of living of
such
family
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families
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.
This
 pattern is viewed to continue in future as the gulf between the rich and poor
countries
 continues to widen. The level of opportunities available in the established
nations
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 room for luring ambitious people from other inferior
countries
 who actually invest
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 their society and create more deficit to their home
nations
. In conclusion, studying abroad has caused massive brain drain and reduced quality of life to struggling
nations
 which is perceived to progress in future due to a large gap in development.
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