In some time countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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begin their university or college studies after finishing their secondary school, there are many advantages and disadvantages

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, the upper hand for travelling or earning at an early age or after finishing high school are many,

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, earning higher salaries at a young age enables them to make intelligent investments decisions from their early career, so when you start early, you are able to enjoy financial independence and security and many more.

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them by, learning how to save money, adjust budgets, become independent and responsible, have problem-solving skills etc.

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, there are many drawbacks too, like, language barrier, abroad can be expensive while moving or roaming in countries etc. Sometimes being irresponsible and use up all the salary rather than saving them. It could

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influence other children of their age. In conclusion, there are more advantages of earning cash, working and travelling than disadvantages, you just need to use your time and wage more productively and responsibly.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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Fully explain your ideas

You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?

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