In some Vinhomes areas, fast food, prepared meals, and sugary drinks are now sold in more shops and at lower prices than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In some

Vinhomes

quarters, fast

food

and sugary

drinks

are now much easier to buy with lower prices than that few years ago.

This

brings about many advantages to

Vinhomes

population.

However

, disadvantages

are

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also

existed.

Firstly

, to say about advantages.

Vinhomes

habitants

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habitats

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will be easier to get their needs. Fast

food

, prepared meals are the most common

kind

of

food

that contain enough nutrients for

people

's

requiments

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requirements

. It will take shorter or no time to prepare. So we can say in short " it is in touch" to everyone in the areas. The following reason, as it is said

that is

much cheaper than in the past. The reason sounds very reasonable to most

people

, not only to

Vinhomes

population. The

habitants

will

spent

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less money on their

food

, they can save some more money

to

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others needs.

However

, fast

food

and

drinks

also

creates

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many disadvantages not only the

Vinhomes

habitants

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habitats

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but

also

other

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people

.

Firstly

, we all know that areas, fast

food

, prepared meals, and sugary

drinks

contains

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a large amount of saturated fat which may be converted to cholesterol during metabolism inside our body,

that

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may lead to various

kind

of heart diseases.

Secondly

, they

also

contain some

kind

of harmful substances

such

as oxidants and free roots that can metabolise to

the

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cancers-induced substances . We are all clear that cardiovascular diseases and cancers are the two leading causes of

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dead

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for human beings. The

last

, all

people

' needs for foods and

drinks

(

Vinhomes

people

), which is so easy to get, may cause

people

be

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lasier

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easier

. They don't want to go out for other social

relation

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, they don't want to create more jobs, more

oppotunities

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opportunities

, they just want to stay at home, playing games, watching television, and ordering

food

and

drinks

through the delivery systems (

for example

Grab

food

..) to bring about. In conclusion, in

Vinhomes

areas as well as other new population quarters, there are many

kind

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kinds

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of fast

food

and sugary

drinks

are now sold with cheaper prices may harm the

habitants's

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life.