In some Vinhomes areas, fast food, prepared meals, and sugary drinks are now sold in more shops and at lower prices than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In some

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quarters, fast

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and sugary

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are now much easier to buy with lower prices than that few years ago.

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brings about many advantages to

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population.

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, disadvantages

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existed.

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, to say about advantages.

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habitants

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will be easier to get their needs. Fast

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, prepared meals are the most common

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of

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that contain enough nutrients for

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requiments

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requirements

. It will take shorter or no time to prepare. So we can say in short " it is in touch" to everyone in the areas. The following reason, as it is said

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much cheaper than in the past. The reason sounds very reasonable to most

people

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, not only to

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population. The

habitants

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will

spent

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less money on their

food

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, they can save some more money

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others needs.

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, fast

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and

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also

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creates

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many disadvantages not only the

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habitants

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but

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other

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people

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.

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, we all know that areas, fast

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, prepared meals, and sugary

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contains

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a large amount of saturated fat which may be converted to cholesterol during metabolism inside our body,

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may lead to various

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of heart diseases.

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, they

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contain some

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of harmful substances

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as oxidants and free roots that can metabolise to

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apply

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cancers-induced substances . We are all clear that cardiovascular diseases and cancers are the two leading causes of

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dead

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for human beings. The

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, all

people

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' needs for foods and

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(

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people

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), which is so easy to get, may cause

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be

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lasier

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easier

. They don't want to go out for other social

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, they don't want to create more jobs, more

oppotunities

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opportunities

, they just want to stay at home, playing games, watching television, and ordering

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and

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through the delivery systems (

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..) to bring about. In conclusion, in

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areas as well as other new population quarters, there are many

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kind

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of fast

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and sugary

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are now sold with cheaper prices may harm the

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habitants's

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life.