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The bar chart below illustrates export earnings in five different groups (petroleum
products
, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agriculture
products
 and
textiles
) from 2015 to 2016. The table displays a change in values of exports, in percentage, in each product
categories
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category
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 in 2016 compared with 2015. Overall, petroleum
products
 were the most earning category in both years, whereas,
textiles
 were the least earning
products
.
In contrast
,
textiles
 showed the most significant increasing percentage of earning, while gems and jewellery were the only product that had negative change. In 2015, around 61
billion
dollars
 was earned from
petroluem
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petroleum
products
. It was still the most earning product, in 2016,
although
 engineered goods showed the same earning (around 62
billion
dollars
).
Textiles
 were the
lowest earning
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lowest-earning
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products
which
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that
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 sold under 30
billion
dollars
.
However
, it could raise the earing in 2016 as the earning of agriculture
products
 (around 31
billion
dollars
). Text=tile had the highest climbing in a change of earing within a year which was 15.24%.
On the other hand
, gems and jewellery displayed a
decline
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declining
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 trend of earning which was 5.18% decreasing.
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