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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

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Few believe
education
 in University or college leads to a successful
career
, apart from them some students quit their
studies
 soon after completing the schooling to get a job. In my point of view,
i
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 believe that graduation is necessary for a successful
career
 and to stand independently. Nowadays, graduation is the primary requirement, to achieve technical and qualified Jobs. In order to get respectable pay, a person needs to have good qualifications. Keeping in mind people believe that college
studies
 definitely improve their
career
. Let us take, to become a teacher, or to become a Doctor, they need be graduated. Alternatively, these days
Education
 became commercial, some students are not in a position to opt for higher
studies
,
on the other
hand
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 they break their
education
 after school and find the jobs which are relevant to them, like assistants, technicians, etc. To conclude,
education
 always encourages, enlighten the student
career
 in the right path, studying beyond school will
additionally
 improve their financial position. Though for certain students it's hard to complete their higher
studies
, for sure the time spent on completing their graduation will earn them a good life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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