Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?
Deforestation
is considered an environmental issue Use synonyms
that is
occurring worldwide because of the demand for expanding the city area. There Linking Words
have
just a few advantages Verb problem
are
of
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to
this
action but it gives so many disadvantages over the advantages to nature and to the Earth.
Nowadays, we are living in a world Linking Words
that
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is lack
supplies and resources including the space to live. Overpopulation makes nations find a new area for Wrong verb form
lacks
its citizen
to live in. One mountain could create more than a hundred houses so people may think it is worth it to cut all the Fix the agreement mistake
their citizens
trees
and Use synonyms
replaced
them with buildings and roads. Wrong verb form
replace
However
, Linking Words
deforestation
in some areas is caused by other reasons Use synonyms
such
as industrial and tourism purposes. Linking Words
For example
, Chaingmai, Linking Words
the
tourist destination located in the North of Thailand is one of the most popular places for travelling. It used to have tremendous beautiful mountains and forests. Correct article usage
a
However
, in the present, those Linking Words
nature
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natures
has
become hotels, restaurants, and tourism spots in order to catch tourists and make money for just a certain group of people.
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have
Deforestation
gives benefits to only humans in the short term. It could make an enormous amount of income to the country by changing forests into accommodations and travel destinations but a lack of Use synonyms
trees
will cause air pollution in the future. Use synonyms
Trees
and plants are the massive and effective factors to reduce carbon dioxide and greenhouse gases, without them, humanity will face global warming which causes many fellow problems. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
deforestation
not only affects the human but Use synonyms
also
animals and insects. Cutting down Linking Words
trees
destroys animal habitats and increases the extinction of species.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
deforestation
is the selfishness of some individuals for their own sake. It impacts all living things in the world including global warming and the extinction of animals.Use synonyms
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