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some people prefer to eat At food stands oR restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home , Which do you prefer ? Use specific seasons and examples to support your answer .

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 is the basic need of man. Proper diet is among the primary prerequisites of health. After enumerating certain factors, I would justify my preference for homemade
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.
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 with, homemade
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 is more hygienic and nutritious.
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, all fast foods use health-eroding chemicals, trans-fats, high levels of sugar, petrochemicals, artificial sweeteners, etc. in their products thereby, making them unhealthy. To illustrate, extra fats can lead to obesity, heart problems; deficiency of carbohydrates can result in weakness of bones and muscles.
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, eating
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 at home is a heartening experience and saves one from an outer polluted environment. Dining with family members at home rejoices everybody because most of the time, they are busy in their respective works.
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, people discuss their experiences; make light talks in informal ways and
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 enjoy while taking meals together.
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, some people prefer fast
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. The tasty spices and flavours of
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 items fascinate people, especially youngsters. I feel that taking
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 at
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 stalls or restaurants occasionally has some advantages. To exemplify, parties can be enjoyed in restaurants, once a month. In the case of the non-availability of domestic resources, eating
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 outside becomes inescapable.
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, it saves time and effort needed in today’s busy life. To conclude, as the benefits of homemade
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 outweigh those of
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 at stalls, I would always like the former more than the latter. It is only occasionally that I would like to have
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 outside.
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