You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. Ask for time off and explain why. Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work. Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence.

#time #work #holiday #manager #dates #times #absence

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

missive to inform you that I will not be available in the office for some days as I will be attending a family function in goa.It's my sister marriage ceremony.I have used all possible ways to shift the dates but at ,

last

I failed in every manner. Since Goa is about half an hour drive from our location.

Thus

,I will be leaving on 21st March 2022 and I will be coming back from the wedding on 24th March 2022.As well as,I had watched the function schedule and in the morning I will be occupied with the wedding rituals but from 5:00 pm onwards,I will be available in case of any query feel free to contact me. I have given the responsibility to Arjun(Marketing head).He will be dealing with all the queries related to my post. I hope you will understand my situation and will grant me off for the dates mentioned above. Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Haman

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