The given pie charts illustrate the ordinary costs of living in five different categories
The given pie charts illustrate the ordinary costs of living in five different categories (housing, transport,
food
, healthcare, other
Correct word choice
and other
goods
and services) for two Asian counties.
A glance at the pie charts reveal
that Change the verb form
reveals
life
expenses related to Replace the word
living
food
, housing, goods
and services have the greatest shares in both countries. Whereas
, healthcare expenditure comprises an insignificant percentage for Japanese and Malaysian families.
The highest costs of living in Japan belong to goods
and food
, respectively. However
, in Malaysia
more than half of expenditures Add a comma
,Malaysia
relates
to housing and Correct subject-verb agreement
relate
food
. Interestingly, housing
comprises only 21% Add an article
the housing
in
Japan. Change preposition
of
Goods
and services include nearly a third
of total expenses in the mentioned countries.
It is also
interesting to note that Japanese
tend to spend twice as much as Malaysians on transportation systems. Correct article usage
the Japanese
Similarly
, healthcare expenses in both countries include only a minor proportion; For Malaysia
it is only 3% and Add a comma
,Malaysia
in
Change preposition
for
Japan
the figure is 6%.Add a comma
,Japan
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