In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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modern time rather than teaching theory by

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used technology and teach the

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it is a positive

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. On the one hand, who are saying it has not any advantage, they argue that it

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high investments so schools or any type of other institutes

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in fees . Which is

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used for study purpose can bad effect on our eyes and

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feel tired to student`s mind early because screen or projector are used to show them

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they cannot teach them properly and it

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. But if they are teaching them by

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less time or

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system . In conclusion, there are some demerits but by using the technology make study more intrusting, easy and improve quality hides its negative

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

Fully explain your ideas

easily. In addition, the city is central to the state, trade, education and many sectors of the human being so society tends to find new experiences and broaden their horizon in the metropolitan which supports people’s capability at work.

Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion