In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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modern time rather than teaching theory by

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used technology and teach the

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used for study purpose can bad effect on our eyes and

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less time or

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system . In conclusion, there are some demerits but by using the technology make study more intrusting, easy and improve quality hides its negative

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

Fully explain your ideas

It’s sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and society. Do you agree or disagree?

American film actor John Wayne said: "Tomorrow is the most important thing in life." How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than the present? What’s your opinion?

Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?