Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Exercise
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plays an important role in each and every person's
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, by doing regular workout an individual always be fit and fine.
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any normal disease, because yoga will maintain its metabolism. But there are many working people who do not pay attention
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doing
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in their
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and because of
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they have to face
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health problems
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example: Diabetes, sugar, heart attack and many more. So in
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why people
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get
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and
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, how can we overcome
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problem. It is widely believed that an individual can not get enough
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for
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on daily basis due to their hectic work schedule and after reaching
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house
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he wants to take rest.
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, if
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office timing from 9:00 to 17:00
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he should wakes up at 6 o'clock and
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get ready for office, depart from home
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hour earlier and after 10 hours reaching at resident approx
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hour later from 17o'clock and in
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period person will tired too much
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, he needs rest.
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, after reaching home there are
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many pending works like cooking food, washing clothes, dishing and many others.
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, in weekend
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or in free
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public either relaxing their body by sleeping or spending
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with their family members by travelling. Now we discuss how can we overcome
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issue. It has been suggested that every employer or human resource manager of the company needs to take out
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for the
exercise
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of every individual of the company.
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, there should be a seperate room and
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for doing
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, gym so that
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get relax his body and increases his efficiency.
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, advertising on social media of health benefits by doing yoga is
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a good idea. In conclusion, wealth plays an important role in everyone's
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but wealth is just a part of
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. So, we never ignore soundness
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. Because "HEALTH IS WEALTH"
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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