Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Exercise
plays an important role in each and every person's life
, by doing regular workout an individual always be fit and fine. Moreover
, that one
hardly get
any normal disease, because yoga will maintain its metabolism. But there are many working people who do not pay attention Change the verb form
gets
on
doing Change the preposition
to
exercise
in their life
and because of this
they have to face may
health problems Correct your spelling
many
for
example: Diabetes, sugar, heart attack and many more. So in Add the comma(s)
,for
this
essay, we are going to discuss the reason that
why people Correct word choice
apply
not
get Add a missing verb
do not
exercise
and then
, how can we overcome this
problem.
It is widely believed that an individual can not get enough time
for workout
on daily basis due to their hectic work schedule and after reaching Add an article
a workout
at
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apply
house
he wants to take rest. Add an article
the house
a house
For instance
, if one
has a
office timing from 9:00 to 17:00 Change the article
an
then
he should wakes up at 6 o'clock and then
get ready for office, depart from home one
hour earlier and after 10 hours reaching at resident approx one
hour later from 17o'clock and in this
period person will tired too much therefore
, he needs rest. Moreover
, after reaching home there are also
many pending works like cooking food, washing clothes, dishing and many others. Furthermore
, in weekend time
or in free time
public either relaxing their body by sleeping or spending time
with their family members by travelling.
Now we discuss how can we overcome this
issue. It has been suggested that every employer or human resource manager of the company needs to take out time
for the exercise
of every individual of the company. For instance
, there should be a seperate room and time
for doing exercise
, gym so that one
get relax his body and increases his efficiency. Moreover
, advertising on social media of health benefits by doing yoga is also
a good idea.
In conclusion, wealth plays an important role in everyone's life
but wealth is just a part of life
. So, we never ignore soundness also
. Because "HEALTH IS WEALTH"Submitted by mayankpd2016 on
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