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The graphic below illustrates the current plan of a university's
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and its future renovated layout. Overall, the
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has a single entrance in front of
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reception. The 25m pool is located in the
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of the
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indoor while the western and the eastern areas are outdoor courts. In the future, the
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will be extended the indoor
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throughout the
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club. The left court will be mainly replaced by a leisure pool. The changing room will be built in front of the pool.
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shop will be installed
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in the right court will be changed to be a
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. The changing room will locate
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sports
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