An increasing number of professionals, such as, teachers and doctors are leaving their own countries to work in developed countries. What are the causes of this problems? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, different professions are rising so much as like
doctors
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teachers
also
involve with it. But they always want to work in developed countries
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this
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developing
country
.
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the experienced person like
doctors
and
teachers
are so much demandable. If they get more
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opportunities
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in another developed
country
that is
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for them obviously. The
first
and foremost problem is that they did not get enough
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the
government
. So that at any chances they want to leave. For, instance the time reported that
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in
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are most of the valuable professions and they obey
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like
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. The
government
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give them
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valuable
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and
teachers
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but others private professions did not get. Above all
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all needed a respectful
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their expectations and needed. The
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bonus. Moving on
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sometimes bound
doctors
and
teachers
to go developed
country
.
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country
has lots of chances to
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degree
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also
increases people to go.
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doctors
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and these degrees
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all over the world
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of
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teachers
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take
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are not at all in our
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they need to go and after
that
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they didn't want to
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when getting more
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in that developed
country
. To remove
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government
should open chances to take
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degree
.
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government
can send them abroad to take
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by
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government
cost. To sum up, the rocketed of going abroad of
teachers
and
doctors
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the country
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. To get more chance by
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then
it reduces most.
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