Nowadays, different professions are rising so much as like
doctors
and
teachers
also
involve with it. But they always want to work in developed countries
instead
of
own
country
.
This
essay intends to analyse
situation and
also
follow some suggestions to alleviate
this
problem.
To begin
with, All of the people are now want to live
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developing
country
.
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the experienced person like
doctors
and
teachers
are so much demandable. If they get more
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in another developed
country
that is
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for them obviously. The
first
and foremost problem is that they did not get enough
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byChange preposition
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the
government
. So that at any chances they want to leave. For, instance the time reported that
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in
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are most of the valuable professions and they obey
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like
godFix the agreement mistake
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. The
government
of
this
country
give them
mostAdd an article
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valuable
opportunity
.
But in our
only
government
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and
teachers
are getChange the verb form
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the opportunity
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but others private professions did not get. Above all
doctors
and
all needed a respectful
opportunity
. The
government
should take
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to
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their expectations and needed. The
government
should as far as give them
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bonus.
Moving on
next
, the
second
thing is that lack of courses or
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sometimes bound
doctors
and
teachers
to go developed
country
.
TheseChange the determiner
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country
has lots of chances to
takingWrong verb form
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degree
so that
itsChange the pronoun
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also
increases people to go.
For example
, In the UK Oxford university there
doctors
have
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and these degrees
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demandWrong verb form
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all over the world
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.
most
of Change preposition
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take
from japan. These
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are not at all in our
country
.
As a result
fromChange preposition
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taking
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they need to go and after
they didn't want to
cameChange the form of the verb
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when getting more
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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in that developed
country
. To remove
problemCorrect article usage
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government
should open chances to take
themCorrect your spelling
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degree
.
government
can send them abroad to take
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degreeFix the agreement mistake
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byChange preposition
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government
cost.
To sum up, the rocketed of going abroad of
teachers
and
doctors
are useful for them but not for
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. To get more chance by
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then
it reduces most.