It is often argued that spending money on the protection of wild animals is pointless since we humans do not need them. Personally, I do not completely support this point of view.
In my opinion, arguing as to whether there is no place for wild
animals
in the 21st century is absurd. I do not agree that the Earth is created only for the benefit of humans, and there is no particular century that means that we have the right to permit or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore
, we do not have any compelling reasons why animals
should be died
out. There is no need to destroy or take advantage of every single part of the land in order for the world’s population to feed or accommodate. Existing side by side with wild Wrong verb form
die
animals
should be our aim because of the fact that there is plenty of space for us. I also
do not believe that protecting animals
is a waste of resources. It is undoubtedly that the protection of natural habitats that
ensures the survival of wild Correct pronoun usage
apply
animals
, and these habitats are also
crucial for human survival according to
most scientists. To take rainforests as an example, they produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilize the Earth’s climate. If we humans destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would be more likely to be outweighed by the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals
and their habitats, we can maintain the natural balance of all life on the surface of the Earth. In conclusion, humans have no right to make a decision as to whether wild animals
should exist or not, and I believe that we ought to do everything we can to preserve them.Submitted by mallaboyevshoxbozbek77 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite