It is often argued that spending money on the protection of wild animals is pointless since we humans do not need them. Personally, I do not completely support this point of view.

In my opinion, arguing as to whether there is no place for wild
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in the 21st century is absurd. I do not agree that the Earth is created only for the benefit of humans, and there is no particular century that means that we have the right to permit or encourage the extinction of any species.
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, we do not have any compelling reasons why
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out. There is no need to destroy or take advantage of every single part of the land in order for the world’s population to feed or accommodate. Existing side by side with wild
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should be our aim because of the fact that there is plenty of space for us. I
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do not believe that protecting
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is a waste of resources. It is undoubtedly that the protection of natural habitats
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ensures the survival of wild
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, and these habitats are
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crucial for human survival
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most scientists. To take rainforests as an example, they produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilize the Earth’s climate. If we humans destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would be more likely to be outweighed by the costs of conservation. By protecting wild
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and their habitats, we can maintain the natural balance of all life on the surface of the Earth. In conclusion, humans have no right to make a decision as to whether wild
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should exist or not, and I believe that we ought to do everything we can to preserve them.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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