Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Developed

countries

often have

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to help the poor

countries

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financial

aid

.

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given

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, often time does not solve the

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of the

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.

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, no matter how much money

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, it will not be sustainable and

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poverty

still

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solved. I personally agree that the

aid

given must be directly targeting

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the

problem

itself, which

may be

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not in the form of money, it may be in

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such

as education and access to technology. Solving

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poverty

can be in many ways. A

country

may need help from other

countries

to emerge from

poverty

.

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, there are a

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components that should be improved. Financial

aid

given from developed

countries

is very beneficial for a

country

that suffers from

poverty

.

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, without a targeted direction, the impact of the

aid

may only in short-term. A

country

should be independent and able to be managed by

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own citizen.

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aid

will never be enough for a

country

to evolve

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if the human resource quality is not well managed.

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, the

aid

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the roots of the

problem

.

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, the lack of qualified human

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can be answered by education

aid

. Another example is the unavailability of technology and resources can be improved by providing the access to resources and technology. In conclusion, I believe that

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a

country

's

from

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poverty

is not enough with

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financial

aid

. The

aid

should be answering the targeted

problem

for a

country

to thrive by

them self

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themself

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.

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,

many

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kind

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of

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can be given to them to become an independent

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that

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free

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from

poverty

. _______