In order to solve traffic problems,governments should tax private car owner heavily and use the money to improve public transportation .what are advantages and disadvantages of such a solution.

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suggested that vehicle owners should pay
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utilize that money in the
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infrastructure
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so that the traffic issues could be reduced. While
this
could have some advantages in terms of reducing the number of cars on the street,
consecuently
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consequently
,reducing the emissions that are harming the environment,
also
, enhancing
puplic
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public
transport,which could save people so much time and money,
however
,there are significant drawbacks that should be taken into consideration,
for example
,
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businesses,
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the one hand,having a good and reliable transportation system will reduce people need
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cars,
in other words
,if
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employee could use,
for instance
, a public bus with cheap ticket cost and
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dedicated
bus lane that has no traffic,
also
to get to his work
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the other hand,
car
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dealers
,gas stations,
car
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,and mechanics will no longer have customers to work with,
as a result
,a big portion of the workers will
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be
get
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,and some companies might
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entirely
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car
prices could help
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traffic
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issue,
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,
this
will harm a
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companys
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companies
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of people might lose their jobs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • emissions
  • eco-friendly
  • carbon footprint
  • public transport systems
  • infrastructure
  • reliability
  • frequency
  • affordable
  • economic burden
  • disproportionately affect
  • mobility
  • commuting
  • overcrowded
  • automobile industry
  • manufacturing
  • job losses
  • combating climate change
  • tax revenue
  • government policy
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