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Some people feel that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be made by perusing course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There has been increasing popularity in
teacher
 training courses in the
last
 few years
although
 the value of these courses is often debated. On one side, these courses provide individuals with formal training in the profession of teaching just as you would imagine with any other profession. It acts as a great platform for amateurs to dip their feet into the profession.
Moreover
,
such
 programs
also
 provide teachers with tips and etiquettes required to be a great
teacher
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.
However
, on the flip side of it, teaching is a combination of intellect, personality and
experience
. Simple attending a program does not make a
teacher
 "good". The
experience
 gained through their professional careers helps shape the
teacher
 along the way.
Moreover
, schools recruiting quality faculty look for many aspects apart from qualification. They seek
experience
,
field
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 of expertise, track record and much more. To summarise, a course can teach the job but it cannot build personality and
experience
. In my ,opinion I think a teaching program is simply a pre-requisite similar to a professional certification but it adds very little value to the quality of the individual's skills.
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