Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should encouraged to question and offer criticisms on their teachers. Others think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that

students

should be allowed to ask

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or criticize their educators for enhancing the education system, whereas others believe that

such

manners would undermine

teachers

’ social standing. I strongly agree with the former opinion and in

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I intend to express my justifications. On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that

students

have the right to express their dissatisfaction about their

teachers

’ behaviour and teaching.

such

actions not only bring about a better and more prosperous educational system

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but

also

contribute to

students

’ self-esteem and confidence as they would learn how they should react throughout different circumstances.

For instance

, some

teachers

’ actions would undeliberately affect children mental health which could cause anxiety or stress.

Therefore

, in

such

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some

students

might become discouraged to pursue their education.

Hence

, if

students

are able to clearly explain their madness,

such

problems will be completely addressed and both

students

and

teachers

themselves will benefit.

On the other hand

, another group of people claim that criticizing and questioning

teachers

is not

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appropriate behaviour. They firmly insist that if

teachers

are challenged and they are not able to handle the occasion, they will not be respected and

this

, in turn, would substantially conducive to disastrous conflicts between

teachers

and

students

.

However

, I do not find

this

argument convincing as

teachers

should have tremendous power in order to dominate their

students

and it is

also

worthwhile mentioning that every critique does not basically mean disrespectfulness. In conclusion, in my view, irrespective of some drawbacks associated with criticism of educators,

students

should have latitude for talking about the problems they would notice due to the fact that it gives them a sense of courage and determination.