Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed

countries

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often have programs to help the poor

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to improve their condition by providing financial

subsidy

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the financial

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are

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given, often time does not solve the root of the

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, no matter how much money is given, it will not be sustainable and underdevelopment is still not be solved. I personally agree that the

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given must be directly targeting the

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itself, which can be not in the form of money, it may be in other forms

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as education and access to technology. Solving

poverty

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can be in many ways. A

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may need help from other

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to emerge from

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, there are many components that should be improved. Financial

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given from developed

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is very beneficial for a

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that suffers from

poverty

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, without a targeted direction, the impact of the

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may only in short-term. A

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should be independent and able to be managed by its own citizen. Financial

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will never be enough for a

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to evolve

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if the human resource quality is not well managed.

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, the

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can be given in

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different forms which target the roots of the

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, the lack of qualified human resources can be answered by education

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. Another example is the unavailability of technology and resources can be improved by providing the access to resources and technology. In conclusion, I believe that solving a

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's

poverty

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is not enough with financial

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. The

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should be answering the targeted

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for a

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to thrive by

themself

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, any

kinds

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of

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can be given to them to become an independent

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that frees

from

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them from

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poverty

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