Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given process diagram describes the information about how
electricity
is generated in a hydroelectric
power
station
. Overall,
water
is the main
sources
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of
electricity
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generating process. According to the diagram illustrates,
water
is taken from river to
dam
by high-level
reservior
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reservoir
and
dam
is stored
water
;
Dam
day
opens and closes
night
time
, after that, flow of
water
to generated
electricity
in
day
and
night
to the
power
station
for manufacturing current and from the
dam
of flow
water
to generate
electricity
in
day
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a day
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,
in contrast
, flow of
water
pumping during
night
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the night
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. Generator to
power
lines and national grid from
power
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the power
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station
and low-level reservoir
releses
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releases
in
day
time
and stores in
night
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the night
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time
.
Final
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process of reversible turbines in
day
time
operate
generator
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the generator
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and
night
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the night
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pump
water
into the high-level reservoir. Of the particular note is
day
time
only current is generated from the hydroelectric
power
station
rather than
night
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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