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Writing Samples
Band 2

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given process diagram describes the information about how
electricity
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 is generated in a hydroelectric
power
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station
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. Overall,
water
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 is the main
sources
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 of
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electricity
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the electricity
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 generating process. According to the diagram illustrates,
water
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 is taken from river to
dam
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 by high-level
reservior
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reservoir
 and
dam
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 is stored
water
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;
Dam
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day
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 opens and closes
night
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time
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, after that, flow of
water
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 to generated
electricity
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 in
day
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 and
night
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 to the
power
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station
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 for manufacturing current and from the
dam
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 of flow
water
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 to generate
electricity
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 in
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day
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a day
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,
in contrast
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, flow of
water
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 pumping during
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night
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the night
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. Generator to
power
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 lines and national grid from
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power
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the power
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station
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 and low-level reservoir
releses
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releases
 in
day
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time
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 and stores in
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night
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the night
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time
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.
Final
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The final
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 process of reversible turbines in
day
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time
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 operate
generator
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the generator
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 and
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night
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the night
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 pump
water
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 into the high-level reservoir. Of the particular note is
day
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time
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 only current is generated from the hydroelectric
power
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station
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 rather than
night
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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